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Chasing highs

10 million hits

Dancer, like the light,  but how the dancer are present can look not as ideal

Consider the light of the bulbs, how it changes the color of the wall

Takes time to shoot the bulbs element and build it

The light of the bulbs can change with the wall

Best not to kill the fish

The third element it’s very important

Have to have something else that links every element other than the color

Think about what the image says rather than just the colors

And how fluent the dance is, the song it’s not exactly fluent

Think about the third element again

And the colors, maybe make it contrasting

Song: good track, not fluid- not really good for contemporary and fish swim

Concept: need choreograph , light is good,  red can change to white because of light, better not to kill fish, something should link third idea with previous, have to buy fish tank - expensive, add something interesting- building up, ink not working with song, third element!!! , red set white sofa idea - contrast , third element should tie everything together, have to think about the girl (cast)